Thursday 12 November 2020

This is a story I made up

 

Hi, this is a story I made up for free choice. It took me 1 day to make it. Hope you like it .  Blog you later


3 comments:

  1. Kia Ora Carlos. My name is Titan from Room 23. I liked the way you used some adverbs because adverbs are kind of big words. When I read your post I learnt that maybe I could make my own story. Next time, you could include more writing just to make it a bit more interesting. How long did it take you to do this?.
    Thanks for sharing your learning. You should check out my blog.
    Blog you later,
    Titan.


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  2. Hi Carlos its me Brianna I really like your story you made up. I have a question for you how long have you been spending time on this? BLOG YA LATER.Brianna.

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  3. Hello Carlos
    hi my name is Sophia and i'm from room 24
    good job Carlos but why did you not check what was underlined. How long did it like one hours or two hours? and I did like it bye the way.
    blog you later.
    Sophia🙂

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